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Is this a good short biograpgy? Please give me feedbacks and help!!!?
My name is a James Coke, and I am seventeen. I was born in England; however I am currently studying in an English school in Madrid, Spain. I have travelled in many countries around the world every year as I enjoy it. I am interested in a lot of sport activities including soccer and basketball, and vividly interested in movies. However most importantly, I am interested in writing scripts for film. I have written several short screen plays as part of my hobbies.
I have currently graduated high school and moving on to college this September in Spain, and because I am obsessed with writing screenplays, I am taking on English Literature as part of my subject choices. I received several awards on several subjects, this includes English Literature. Apart from school I stay at home all day as I do not have many friends around where I live, however, I still take time to do some running with my younger brother and driver.
This is a good overall description of yourself. It would help a person evaluating this if you mentioned what this little bio is for. Is it for a a college application or such? If so it seems a littel short.
In the sentence, " I have curently graduated from high school . . . , I think recectly would be a better word than currently.
The beginning of the first sentence of the second paragraph is a run on sentence and would be better written: I have currently graduated high school and (am) moving on to college this September in Spain. Because I am obsessed with writing screenplays, I am taking on English Literature as part of my subject choices.
I added the am in parentheses above as it makes the sentence run more smoothly.
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